Destroyng the Empire of Self

So here is a song I'm working on.  I have a melody sort of worked out but nothing final.  Let me know what you think.
Title: not sure yet, thinking of calling it "ransomed" or something using "home".  Ideas welcome.
Verse 1
There's a place in this city
With pillars and stone
Every gold accent
and all of man's [...]

Last night while hanging out with friends we listened to this song. 
I love this song for the arrangement and the lyrics, and the prayer it invites.  Search for As It Is In Heaven by Matt Maher for a listen if you haven’t already heard it.   
As It Is In Heaven by Matt Maher
Our Father [...]

Why did you pay this price?
To take this sin with your life
I’m amazed by your sacrifice
King of highest praise
There is nothing that I can do
To merit this Love from you
Your mercy rains down today
Words of praise and honor we say
Jesus you paid the cost
To show the way to the lost
The light is shining today
From the [...]

Sometimes I wonder what God sees in me that makes Him, the God of the Universe, call me to minister to His youth and be a vehicle for His love.  I'm a fallen human who trips up a lot and absolutely needs Confession.  Thank you Father for giving us Your Son and making that possible. 

WHAT DO YOU [...]

So here is a song I wrote upset at some of what is going on in society.  Just a little rant and prayer for intervention.
 
Fill this World
 
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Have you seen the news lately?  Have you felt the pain?
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We sit on the couch;  And [...]